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Thursday, March 29, 2018

MY EMBARRASSING STORY

An embarrassing story going to the beach swimming!!
WARNING THIS IS NOT REAL THIS IS MADE UP.


It was November 20 when I was packing up my red clothes
and swimming togs to go to the Bloomer beach. On  Bloomer
beach they doing a fun day they only do this once a year on
20 November. Finally we finished packing up our gear we got
in the car, I spirited as fast as a Bugatti veyron to to the car.
I was with my friends and family, my parents  drove there it
was about 30k away, finally we were there, first thing we did
was explore, we saw a sign that there was fireworks at 8:58 am
all the children ask “can we see the fireworks” “fine” reply the
parents, and others. We walked to get some food after that we
walked to go to the changing room of course I walked to the
boys changing room. I pop on my red swimming shorts they're
had an skull design on it. First we swam in the blue ocean just
to leave the best for last, the reason why I hate swimming in the
ocean is that the water all dirty and salty, and you get thirsty
faster if you drink it YIKES. I did drink about 5 cm of it. Finally
we walked to the hot pools it was NICE, after that we had to
get out 4 hours in the pool whoa. When I walked in I could not
find my bag, wait what SOMEONE STOLE MY BLACK BAG
IT HAD MY CLOTHES AND MY TOWEL. Everyone heard me
and laugh I WAS MAD. Well if I can’t find them I will just try to
find it when I walked out then I saw my bag, oh no I am SO
MAD, I can’t swim, once I tried at school when I was 6 I kept
sinking, still now I’m better I guess... But I still sink.
(True fact about me). Still I had to go out I ran across the
beach as fast as a raging bull, I was in the wet water I was
running slower and slower as I kept running, soon it was up to
my knees, I began jumping high as a white fluffy bunny rabbit,
I was jumping less higher and more lower, now it was up to my
hips, I went charging rage ran but it was no use, my friends and
my family got change “Hey shouted my dad come back or you
will soon... I tripped over trip” and that’s why I hate swimming in
ocean and the water getting salty, (true fact about me). It was up
to my arms now my parents chasing me saying COME BACK
COME BACK, then, I thought to myself it just a bag but it has
my clothes the water was up to my shoulders, I should give up
then a wave slam at my togs and on to me, oh I HATE THE
SEA. A few hours later I woke up in bed, at my house all my
friends and family were watching me I told I had the craziest
dream it felt real then I felt warm  WOW!!. Whoa whoa whoa
I forgot about the fireworks, yeah their came in red yellow and
all sorts of color. THE END.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   

Monday, March 12, 2018

Work in progress character Description!! For the past week I have been working on writing a character description check out where I am at so far!


  1. His name was Sam Cordaz Ding.
  2. His skin was normal as any other person (skin well mostly).
  3. His tuxedo was long as a cape.
  4. He was holding the ultimate heavy wand.
  5. He has the most toothy shiny teeth you'll ever see.
  6. He has the most shiny lucky armour.
  7. His hair was a dark as the sea.
  8. He has a

Thursday, November 16, 2017

Blooms task wk 5 Tm 4 2017

Book: School Journal PART 3 NUMBER 3 1995.
Story: Out on the Trail with the Siberian Huskies.

KA
Ray Marshalls, huskies, other people and huskies.

CC                               
Firstly it tells, us about Ray, and his huskies training every winter weekend with other members of the huskies club, for a race. Secondly it tells us about the owners wearing colorful clothes. Next they race. Lastly it talks about the huskies.

AA
What am I?
  1. I can race.
  2. I am a pet.
  3. A lot of people in New Zealand own me.
  4. I am a type of wolf/dog.
  5. I am cute.
  6. I am friendly.
Do you know what am I?
I am a huskie.

ANC
Investigating…
Huskies.
  1. Huskies race.
  2. Huskies are pets.
  3. Huskies are hot when it is 12+ degrees.
  4. Huskies can race in pine forest.
  5. Huskies can run.
  6. Huskies have fur.

NIB

EA
I rate this text 2 out of 10 because this blooms was too long and the story was too long.


Friday, November 10, 2017

MY BLOOMS FOR WK 4 TM 4

Book: School JOURNAL Part 3 Number 3 2004.

Story: Save our sea horses.

KA
Summer, Melissa, seahorse, Percy, Pegasus.

CC
First they went to a pet shop to get a pet seahorse. The seahorse name was, Pegasus, Percy. Secondly they took care of it. Next they have realized that the place the seahorses are living are not a good place for them. Finally summer, recive a message in the mail to tell her about the good choice she did letting the seahorses out.

AA
What am I?
  1. I am animal.
  2. I live in the sea.
  3. I am small.
  4. I am not a predator.
  5. I am not faster than a shark.
  6. I lay eggs.

ANA

xD
;(
Other
They buyed two pet horses.
They had to get rid of the pets.
Someone send a mail for summer.
They looked after the seahorses.
The environment was bad for the seahorses.
She found seahorses bones.

NIB
MY AWESOME MACHINE!


EA

I rate this text a 4 because it is not very interesting.

Wednesday, November 1, 2017

The singer blooms

Story: The singer
Task: Blooms
Book: School Journal  Part 3 Number 3 2004.

KA
Tiny, the shark, crayfish, conger eel, (Whatever that is), groper, (Whatever that is), octopus, mango, (Whatever that is), Brother, The main person, cousins, Jackie, campers, paua, kuia, a girl, Tangaroa.

CB
  1. Groper.
  2. Mango.
  3. Dorsel.
  4. Tomahawk.

AA
What am I?
  1. I live in the sea.
  2. I  have a fin.
  3. I am a predator.
  4. Most of me are not predators.
  5. I have been living for a long time.
  6. I can smell your blood.
Do you know what am I?
I am a…...SHARK

ANA

xD
D;
Other
The singer sang.
Tiny was bleeding.
It was a hot sunny day.
They helped the shark to live.
There was a shark.
The campers found the shark.


NIC
WRITE A NEW ENDING.
10 years later everyone grew, bigger and they all saw the shark come back. Then the shark wanted to play with them. So they did and the shark did no harm. THe only one problem was the shark, can not stay on land. So they decided to teach the shak how to go on land. 3 years later the shark learnt how to go on land. You did very well said Tiny.

EA
I rated this text a solid big fat 9. No offense nine, because it brings me back to my young self. Well I used to like sharks but now yea I still like shark.

HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS BLOOMS.

Friday, October 20, 2017

JUST BUSKING OR YEAH!!

Just Busking


Make a copy of this document and remember to put it in your Reading Folder!
Please make sure that you write your answers to the questions in FULL SENTENCES

  1. What does the right hand grip? A battered ghetto-blaster.

2. What does the crazy old country guy set up? His ten-tonne amp at the bank corner.

3. What does the world timidly mean? It means a manner of bravery and confidence.


4. What does Tau play? He plays a guitar.

5. What does his brother play? He plays drums.

6. What is uncle wearing? A suit and a white shirt.
7. Why do you think people busk? Because maybe they enjoy it.

8. Where is Bob Marley from? Jamaica.
9. What happened to the man on the street? He just died.

10. What did the the children do when they realised something was wrong with the man on the street? Bring him to the jeans shop.


FACTS ABOUT THE BEST BUSKER EVER!!