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Wednesday, November 1, 2017

The singer blooms

Story: The singer
Task: Blooms
Book: School Journal  Part 3 Number 3 2004.

KA
Tiny, the shark, crayfish, conger eel, (Whatever that is), groper, (Whatever that is), octopus, mango, (Whatever that is), Brother, The main person, cousins, Jackie, campers, paua, kuia, a girl, Tangaroa.

CB
  1. Groper.
  2. Mango.
  3. Dorsel.
  4. Tomahawk.

AA
What am I?
  1. I live in the sea.
  2. I  have a fin.
  3. I am a predator.
  4. Most of me are not predators.
  5. I have been living for a long time.
  6. I can smell your blood.
Do you know what am I?
I am a…...SHARK

ANA

xD
D;
Other
The singer sang.
Tiny was bleeding.
It was a hot sunny day.
They helped the shark to live.
There was a shark.
The campers found the shark.


NIC
WRITE A NEW ENDING.
10 years later everyone grew, bigger and they all saw the shark come back. Then the shark wanted to play with them. So they did and the shark did no harm. THe only one problem was the shark, can not stay on land. So they decided to teach the shak how to go on land. 3 years later the shark learnt how to go on land. You did very well said Tiny.

EA
I rated this text a solid big fat 9. No offense nine, because it brings me back to my young self. Well I used to like sharks but now yea I still like shark.

HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS BLOOMS.

6 comments:

  1. Hi Nolan it's me Levi and I realy love the bloom's and the shark did no harm cool so I just want to say great job on the work

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  2. hi i like it because is has funny faces on ANA my fav one is XD

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