Book: School JOURNAL Part 3 Number 3 2004.
Story: Save our sea horses.
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Summer, Melissa, seahorse, Percy, Pegasus.
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First they went to a pet shop to get a pet seahorse. The seahorse name was, Pegasus, Percy. Secondly they took care of it. Next they have realized that the place the seahorses are living are not a good place for them. Finally summer, recive a message in the mail to tell her about the good choice she did letting the seahorses out.
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What am I?
- I am animal.
- I live in the sea.
- I am small.
- I am not a predator.
- I am not faster than a shark.
- I lay eggs.
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xD
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;(
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They buyed two pet horses.
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They had to get rid of the pets.
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Someone send a mail for summer.
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They looked after the seahorses.
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The environment was bad for the seahorses.
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She found seahorses bones.
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MY AWESOME MACHINE!
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I rate this text a 4 because it is not very interesting.
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