Blooms task wk 5 Tm 4 2017

Book: School Journal PART 3 NUMBER 3 1995.

Story: Out on the Trail with the Siberian Huskies.

KA

Ray Marshalls, huskies, other people and huskies.

CC                               

Firstly it tells, us about Ray, and his huskies training every winter weekend with other members of the huskies club, for a race. Secondly it tells us about the owners wearing colorful clothes. Next they race. Lastly it talks about the huskies.

AA

What am I?

1. I can race.
2. I am a pet.
3. A lot of people in New Zealand own me.
4. I am a type of wolf/dog.
5. I am cute.
6. I am friendly.

Do you know what am I?

I am a huskie.

ANC

Investigating…

Huskies.

1. Huskies race.
2. Huskies are pets.
3. Huskies are hot when it is 12+ degrees.
4. Huskies can race in pine forest.
5. Huskies can run.
6. Huskies have fur.

NIB

https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/18N3QNbI2gpasHDnsRaQygMu5q1SWCFTIvAaaQ-cryAw/edit

EA

I rate this text 2 out of 10 because this blooms was too long and the story was too long.

MY BLOOMS FOR WK 4 TM 4

Book: School JOURNAL Part 3 Number 3 2004.

Story: Save our sea horses.

KA

Summer, Melissa, seahorse, Percy, Pegasus.

CC

First they went to a pet shop to get a pet seahorse. The seahorse name was, Pegasus, Percy. Secondly they took care of it. Next they have realized that the place the seahorses are living are not a good place for them. Finally summer, recive a message in the mail to tell her about the good choice she did letting the seahorses out.

AA

What am I?

1. I am animal.
2. I live in the sea.
3. I am small.
4. I am not a predator.
5. I am not faster than a shark.
6. I lay eggs.

ANA

xD	;(	Other
They buyed two pet horses.	They had to get rid of the pets.	Someone send a mail for summer.
They looked after the seahorses.	The environment was bad for the seahorses.	She found seahorses bones.

NIB

MY AWESOME MACHINE!

https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1lM43OygKv8x9ZtyDl5Swle7KgzR__b3g7_Uwe8UaKtA/edit

EA

I rate this text a 4 because it is not very interesting.

The singer blooms

Story: The singer

Task: Blooms

Book: School Journal  Part 3 Number 3 2004.

KA

Tiny, the shark, crayfish, conger eel, (Whatever that is), groper, (Whatever that is), octopus, mango, (Whatever that is), Brother, The main person, cousins, Jackie, campers, paua, kuia, a girl, Tangaroa.

CB

1. Groper.
2. Mango.
3. Dorsel.
4. Tomahawk.

AA

What am I?

1. I live in the sea.
2. I  have a fin.
3. I am a predator.
4. Most of me are not predators.
5. I have been living for a long time.
6. I can smell your blood.

Do you know what am I?

I am a…...SHARK

ANA

xD	D;	Other
The singer sang.	Tiny was bleeding.	It was a hot sunny day.
They helped the shark to live.	There was a shark.	The campers found the shark.

NIC

WRITE A NEW ENDING.

10 years later everyone grew, bigger and they all saw the shark come back. Then the shark wanted to play with them. So they did and the shark did no harm. THe only one problem was the shark, can not stay on land. So they decided to teach the shak how to go on land. 3 years later the shark learnt how to go on land. You did very well said Tiny.

EA

I rated this text a solid big fat 9. No offense nine, because it brings me back to my young self. Well I used to like sharks but now yea I still like shark.

HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS BLOOMS.